Well, nothing much to say here since I've said most of the stuff i could say on the 3 previous versions. I do like the way the new header comes in though, the cutout....is nice yet the design wouldn't lose anything if you removed it and the particles are still damned fun. Speaking of, do bigger particles have a stronger...ugh..."gravity" than the smaller ones or is it equal on all particles?

Oh and...are these 4 lines in the upper right corner for adjusting the colume or not? If they aren't, then you should make them turn music on/off, because even though Cheshyre's stuff is damned good, music and no chance of turing it off are annoying on websites.

BTW, how did you make the particles. I'm assumine each one got their own random movement speed and acceleration, if the _x and _y are small enough they change the course, but how did you draw those lines in between them?

This was longer than I thought....

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Oh my Goddess..!
Thats so damn pretty and professional.
Really good work. I like the Grass-Print!

Thank you .

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Wow, long post for nothing much .

I need to make the cutout come in better, i'll work on that. This is just the design really, i'll add all the tidbits and intro stuff soon .

Not yet, i forgot about that, i'll add it now . I have to ask cheshrye before i publish the site, i will credit him shortly.

The particle engine was made by piecing together some stuff from a book i bought and my own coding for the mass (eg _xscale, _yscale = mass). Basically, one particle searches for the nearest one, then accelerates towards it, then, because all of them are moving, it arcs around it.

The lines are pretty simple, the alpha of them is just based on the proximity of the nodes.

Anyway, thanks .

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Be sure to disable right-clicking menu when you're done.
Nice homepage text.
IDK what you have to say about this... but that logo doesn't go with the banner.
Again.
Love the music.
Did you make it?
Nice job again... no matter what you use for the final product... it'll get people interested for sure.

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Nope, musics by a guy named Cheshyre . I've remove the logo and fixed the menu now, thanks .

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Very nice, I really like this

Just One? Should "New Conent" be New Content

anyway, love the particles, it's almost a dance!

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Yeah, its just some quick preview text . Thanks.

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that is friggin sweet
alot better than the last version i saw (v1)
and i'm glad u made it look less 15 fps-ish lol
im lovin the banner and the plant thing at the start hehe... this is the style i've wanted to be able to do for ages, jus never got the hang of it

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